Hot take: This scene is good.

I think that Hinata's speech was great and I have to say that this scene is a little weird when she thought that but in her defense, Naruto is like Hinata's comfort from her cousin's sacrifice and besides, she's not entirely over Neji's sacrifice. In Matter of fact, she cried at Neji's funeral after the war and people act like that Neji died at the page before this when this was after Hinata had tried to pull Naruto from the brink of despair and helped him got back the spirit to continue on with the help of Kurama. Hinata thinks of Neji as a brother.