My friend challenged me to make a female avatar

He said if he liked the avatar he would give me robux to buy said avatar, but apparently he said its the worst female avatar hes ever seen.

Im a guy, an emo one at that so i dont rlly know much about female avatar and i agree its a bit plain or generic but "the worst ive ever seen" is just a bit of the top.

One of the other conditions he put was for it to be under 1k robux and this avatar was 355 robux

The main purpose of this post is that i want your opinion on this avatar and how i can make it better so that one day i can finally het that free robux from him (hes probably never offer to do it again)